Is this the start of a hard-boiled noir or a modern-day thriller?
To help you flesh out this draft, what direction are we taking? This bitch takes you to the dark side of the fo...
The "dark side of the force" reference implies a subversion of something that was meant to be good or balanced. If you give me a bit more context on the "she" or the setting, I can help you structure the next few paragraphs. Is this the start of a hard-boiled noir
Whether you’re looking at it from a pop-culture perspective or using it as a gritty opening hook, that’s a heavy-hitter of a sentence. It sets a tone of inevitable descent and raw, maybe even cynical, realism. maybe even cynical