: Not just the weather, but the distance between people.
Since this is a "free beat," it likely has a predictable 8-bar loop structure. To make your "piece" stand out: free_grustnyi_bit_dlya_repa_wounds_l_lirika_sad...
: Keep them quiet and ghostly. Echoed "yeahs" or "no" whispered in the background will add to the "Wounds" atmosphere. : Not just the weather, but the distance between people
: This should be melodic and soaring but tragic. It needs to repeat the word "Wounds" or a metaphor for it (like cracks in glass). Echoed "yeahs" or "no" whispered in the background
. Move from the physical to the psychological. Why did this happen? Betrayal, self-sabotage, or just the passage of time? This is where you get aggressive or "crunchy" with the flow to show frustration.
. Focus on the physical world. The messy room, the unanswered texts, the way the weather reflects the mood. Use "heavy" words: lead, gray, asphalt, salt.
The word "Wounds" suggests that the trauma isn't fresh, but it isn't healed yet either. The "sad lyrical" vibe usually focuses on the that follows a period of high emotional pain.
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